Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Magic Knowing

Swell, swoon, swirl
Dipping
Holding her garments high
Blind meeting
Birthday gift
Christmas stocking
Magic knowing
Mind echos Yes
On tongue's tip
Love

Midnight, New Year
First kiss
Fire place and works
Flame to ember
Steady glow
Snow and angels
Magic knowing
Sunset in her pocket
On tongue's voice
Love

This entry was inspired by this week's Magpie. The image invokes thoughts of a winter romance for me, which is how mine began.

24 comments:

  1. nice...like the repitition of magic knowing...and the sunshine in the pocket as well...very nice...

    you should drop this in One Shot tonight...

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  2. Thanks Brian! What is One Shot?

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  3. Sunset in her pocket, love that imagery!!! A delightful Magpie!

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  4. Oh! How lovely! Beautifully put. And I know the rest of the story.:

    Ma

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  5. A lovely dancing sense of language here.

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  6. Lots of great images flashed through my mind. Nice poem, very gentle.

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  7. Superb word-pictures, light flowing mood. Good stuff.

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  8. "Sunset in her pocket"...wonderful images!

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  9. that one is a real thing..love the intensity and vivid images..Excellent one shot! Tammy..:)

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  10. I like the structure you have chosen for your love story. It works really well with the repetition surrounding the growing relationship. nice ...

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  11. found your poem on One Shot.
    Love it! All the beautiful qualities of winter and romance wrapped up in an ingenious collaboration of words.

    I like the way you've written it. It is like a kiss.

    thank you
    Hope

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  12. Romantic and mysterious. You create a winter mood. Hope we see more of your poetry. Welcome to One Shot.

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  13. Nicely written, interesting structure... thoughts of love.

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  14. Dear Tammy... thanks for sharing a nice work...
    Liked is so much...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  15. Ooh! I love the way you use the words in this. Very rhythmic. =3

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  16. I too like the use of imagery and the rhythmic, flashback sense to it.

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  17. Sweet romantic love, lovely writing :) April

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  18. All signs of love. So familiar and yet so new! :)

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  19. wonderful imagery...thanks for sharing pete

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  20. How are you, friend?

    Glad to land on your exciting poetry land here.

    Welcome linking in a poem to our potluck today, Thanks in advance!

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