Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Magic Knowing

Swell, swoon, swirl
Dipping
Holding her garments high
Blind meeting
Birthday gift
Christmas stocking
Magic knowing
Mind echos Yes
On tongue's tip
Love

Midnight, New Year
First kiss
Fire place and works
Flame to ember
Steady glow
Snow and angels
Magic knowing
Sunset in her pocket
On tongue's voice
Love

This entry was inspired by this week's Magpie. The image invokes thoughts of a winter romance for me, which is how mine began.
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24 comments:

  1. Brian MillerOctober 26, 2010 at 10:17 AM

    nice...like the repitition of magic knowing...and the sunshine in the pocket as well...very nice...

    you should drop this in One Shot tonight...

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  2. UnknownOctober 26, 2010 at 10:19 AM

    Thanks Brian! What is One Shot?

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  3. AnonymousOctober 26, 2010 at 10:57 AM

    Gorgeous, flowing poem!

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  4. Coloring Outside the LinesOctober 26, 2010 at 11:13 AM

    Wonderful magpie!

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  5. *October 26, 2010 at 1:50 PM

    Sunset in her pocket, love that imagery!!! A delightful Magpie!

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  6. Maureen NewmanOctober 26, 2010 at 4:29 PM

    Oh! How lovely! Beautifully put. And I know the rest of the story.:

    Ma

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  7. AnonymousOctober 26, 2010 at 6:32 PM

    A lovely dancing sense of language here.

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  8. tuberiderOctober 26, 2010 at 6:33 PM

    Lots of great images flashed through my mind. Nice poem, very gentle.

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  9. Steve IsaakOctober 26, 2010 at 7:04 PM

    Superb word-pictures, light flowing mood. Good stuff.

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  10. TimoteoOctober 26, 2010 at 7:05 PM

    "Sunset in her pocket"...wonderful images!

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  11. Desert RoseOctober 26, 2010 at 7:09 PM

    that one is a real thing..love the intensity and vivid images..Excellent one shot! Tammy..:)

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  12. The Whispering She-OakOctober 26, 2010 at 7:35 PM

    I like the structure you have chosen for your love story. It works really well with the repetition surrounding the growing relationship. nice ...

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  13. HopeOctober 26, 2010 at 7:51 PM

    found your poem on One Shot.
    Love it! All the beautiful qualities of winter and romance wrapped up in an ingenious collaboration of words.

    I like the way you've written it. It is like a kiss.

    thank you
    Hope

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  14. VictoriaOctober 27, 2010 at 12:07 AM

    Romantic and mysterious. You create a winter mood. Hope we see more of your poetry. Welcome to One Shot.

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  15. ReflectionsOctober 27, 2010 at 1:07 AM

    Nicely written, interesting structure... thoughts of love.

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  16. Shashidhar SharmaOctober 27, 2010 at 5:02 AM

    Dear Tammy... thanks for sharing a nice work...
    Liked is so much...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  17. UnknownOctober 27, 2010 at 12:09 PM

    Ooh! I love the way you use the words in this. Very rhythmic. =3

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  18. dustusOctober 27, 2010 at 12:55 PM

    I too like the use of imagery and the rhythmic, flashback sense to it.

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  19. Kathe W.October 27, 2010 at 1:01 PM

    great imagery- lovely words!

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  20. AnonymousOctober 27, 2010 at 4:59 PM

    Sweet romantic love, lovely writing :) April

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  21. MonaOctober 28, 2010 at 3:33 AM

    All signs of love. So familiar and yet so new! :)

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  22. MarshyOctober 29, 2010 at 5:47 PM

    wonderful imagery...thanks for sharing pete

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  23. AnonymousNovember 9, 2010 at 3:46 PM

    magical tale.

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  24. AnonymousNovember 9, 2010 at 3:46 PM

    How are you, friend?

    Glad to land on your exciting poetry land here.

    Welcome linking in a poem to our potluck today, Thanks in advance!

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    Some awards will be assigned upon participation.

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    Welcome follow us back.

    First time participants can simply submit an old poem.

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