Very nice. I like the idea of inspiration coming from the conversation around you. Good one.-- KayKay, Alberta, CanadaAn Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Love the phrase 'strut triumphant'.
ha. fatter than he is...oh i can see him strut...smiles.
Ha. We keep chickens, but got a rooster mixed in our last batch of chicks, and 'strut triumphant' is a pretty accurate description.
He needs to strut right on down to KFC! Great Magpie!
I don't think I would want to tangle with him. Nice one.
Strut triumphant... oh but the cock loves his roost, doesn't he.
Great Tale... I enjoyed such a beautiful one with few words...ॐ नमः शिवाय Om Namah Shivaya Twitter: @VerseEveryDay Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
Nice opening line!
this was good and tasty :)
Very very good!bits and pieces
nice one shot! and tasty chicken magPIE.
Love the little biblical reference thrown in! Nice.
Sounds quite full of himself - as every rooster needs to be! Great images. and fun.
Good one, Tammy!
WooHoo - good one!
perfect imagery! thank you
wonderful share....cocky so & so....cheers pete
Nice one, Tammy.
Good, spare-worded work.
"Roast in this house" me thinks.Tee hee! Ma
it is so good to read you ..missed your talent...compact tale,smartly done!
ha nice - you paint quite a picture with your take on the magpie..have one up as well..
sounds like a rooster...confident
Strutting with wide eyes for sure. Great job.QMM
so lovely and convincing.powerful poem.xx