ha. great truth in those last two linesthere are not barriers we can errectthat would keep him from seeing usfor who we are
And in a way it is a comfort to be known that well, and that one can't hide even what one would want to.
a soul Read before written... I JUST LOVE THAT!
I like how your poem can be understood differently depending on who the 'you' is.
"Read before written"...ooh I like that! Nice work.
I'm with Gabriella ... simple poem, but interpretation is open depending on the soul of the reader ....
Oh yes don't try to hide the soul has a way of revealing itself. Great poem.
Nicely done...thanks for sharing
It is usually pointless to hide. Our soul will out us eventually. Nice write!
Thanks everyone. I had fun writing it.
I have someone who knows me like that...but really only one someone
Great write. I enjoyed reading this one.
Beautifully written by a beautiful soul!
What a blessing to my soul tonight.