You are everywhere
Always with me
Through atomkinesis
I almost hear your voice
A whisper over storm
A pryokinetic ghost rider
What you sow is ablaze
Through cracked clay of your making
The empathic watcher
Vitakinetic
All is well
Resurrected
Spawn new life in me
This is in response to Sunday Scribblings' post of Superhero and ABC Wednesday's letter V. I'm not sure about this one. It may be too abstract, too out of the context of what is going on in my mind. Maybe some tweaking is in order....We'll see.
Electrical storm and fireball captured on camera © Phil Bland
nah. i like it...and i get what you are saying...
ReplyDeleteGo ahead and tweak it if you like, but I like it the way it is. We don't need to know everything going on in your head to appreciate the words of the poem.
ReplyDeletenot so sure,
ReplyDeletebut at time being abstract is fun...
we love fictions...
It reminds me of my childhood where I love those superheros, eagerly hoping to be one of them!!! nice!!!
ReplyDeleteReading your note at the end, it occurred to me that the reason I like this poem so much is because of its abstract mystery and subtle nuance. This is a wonderful piece of poetry :)
ReplyDeleteThanks everybody! Maybe I will keep it just as is then. :)
ReplyDeleteyes, great V word, too.
ReplyDeleteOn behalf of ABC Wednesday, thank you! - ROG
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/07/pinks-in-6-words-i-wish-u-award-winning.html
ReplyDelete6 awards,
pick anything you like,
enjoy!
Cheers!