Monday, January 3, 2011

My First Haiku (Untitled as it should be)

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Winter sun summer
On my skin petals to bloom
Like a cat purring

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My first attempt at writing a haiku. I hope I added the elements identified on One Stop Poetry Form and sounded my syllables out correctly. Giggle. What a fun exercise!
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  1. Pat CeganJanuary 3, 2011 at 7:37 PM

    Well done! I love Heiku because it cures my verbosity. The element of surprise at the end is fun, too. Keep going...it is a bit addicting! hugs, pat

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  2. Brian MillerJanuary 3, 2011 at 11:07 PM

    purrrrrr....my cat moves across our bed with the sun beam...lol. nice haiku

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  3. Ramesh SoodJanuary 4, 2011 at 12:02 AM

    This is beautiful.. liked being here and enjoyed the haiku.. it is about six months now that got fascinated to write haikus alongwith long poems.. I thank you for visiting my page too..

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  4. ClaudiaJanuary 4, 2011 at 5:11 PM

    oh i like the purring cat...so nice

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  5. Maureen NewmanJanuary 4, 2011 at 8:52 PM

    Instinctively! Nice.

    Is that who I think it is?

    Ma

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  6. Steve IsaakJanuary 6, 2011 at 6:17 AM

    Completely related to this - my cat does this, a lot. Good, solid piece.

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 11, 2011 at 8:56 PM

    cute.

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 11, 2011 at 8:56 PM

    I invite you to join Jingle Poetry Potluck week 17, link in 1 to 3 old poems today, Thanks for the valuable support!


    Potluck Week 17 Treat/Awards 4 You, Enjoy!

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