tight...love that last line cause it sent my mind spinning...
Yay! That's what I was hoping for. Thanks Brian.
I think I had a similar reaction. Fantastic!
Short and sweet, just like the few opening notes of Vivaldi's Spring.
I have a soft spot for haiku...
Thanks everybody. ZephyrInk, I'm embarrassed to admit I don't know Vivaldi's Spring. Looking it up now. :)
Giggle. I did know it didn't know the name. Love it. Thanks!
But not as you hear me nowInterpretation is everything...
Its perfect Tammy.You turned around words and gave a thought to reflect on... last line was perfect. I enjoyed it.Shashiॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah Shivayahttp://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2010/11/still-life-fountains-of-spiritual.htmlTwitter @VerseEveryDay
Yow! This is terrific!