Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Second Haiku

I mean what I say
But not as you hear me now
Spring understanding

© 2011 by Tammy Newman. All rights reserved


My second attempt at a haiku as I learn from the creative individuals at One Stop Poetry and inspired by this week's Magpie.

11 comments:

  1. tight...love that last line cause it sent my mind spinning...

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  2. Yay! That's what I was hoping for. Thanks Brian.

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  3. I think I had a similar reaction. Fantastic!

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  4. Short and sweet, just like the few opening notes of Vivaldi's Spring.

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  5. I have a soft spot for haiku...

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  6. Thanks everybody. ZephyrInk, I'm embarrassed to admit I don't know Vivaldi's Spring. Looking it up now. :)

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  7. Giggle. I did know it didn't know the name. Love it. Thanks!

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  8. But not as you hear me now

    Interpretation is everything...

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  9. Its perfect Tammy.
    You turned around words and gave a thought to reflect on...
    last line was perfect.
    I enjoyed it.

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2010/11/still-life-fountains-of-spiritual.html
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