Saturday, June 25, 2011

Draft: Endangered Pleasures 2/Your Way

You walk in all big and tall
Owning the place
Kick off your shoes
And put your feet up
Blissfully unaware
That you weren't
Invited

Baby, I love your way

Say what you mean
Stop begging me to ask you
I'm not a puppet
Only interested by the
Trailers you use to 
Tease me

Charming and funny
In your way
I watch you in awe
Unsuspecting the
Twister
Standing still

© 2011 by Tammy Newman. All rights reserved.


A friend suggested that the thoughts in Endangered Pleasures were three stories. And after Brian suggested I flesh them out, I'm giving it a try. So story 1 is Your way. Still not quite there but coming.

5 comments:

  1. like the off beat song rhyme as it opposes the rest, think you should continue it throughout...

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  2. Enjoy your day !!!
    Greetings from France,

    Pierre

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  3. Hello, glad to land in your magical island of poetry.
    Hope all is well.
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    BEST!
    Weekend greetings!
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  4. The Gooseberry GardenDecember 6, 2011 at 11:12 AM

    http://gooseberrygoespoetic.blogspot.com/2011/12/poetry-picnic-week-16-my-life-in-free.html


    Happy Birthday.

    we have your date stated in our poetry picnic post,

    link in a random poem to share if you could.

    bless you.

    keep up the excellence.

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