Owning the place
Kick off your shoes
And put your feet up
Blissfully unaware
That you weren't
Invited
Baby, I love your way
Say what you mean
Stop begging me to ask you
I'm not a puppet
Only interested by the
Trailers you use to
Tease me
Charming and funny
In your way
I watch you in awe
Unsuspecting the
Twister
Standing still
© 2011 by Tammy Newman. All rights reserved.
A friend suggested that the thoughts in Endangered Pleasures were three stories. And after Brian suggested I flesh them out, I'm giving it a try. So story 1 is Your way. Still not quite there but coming.
I watch you in awe
Unsuspecting the
Twister
Standing still
© 2011 by Tammy Newman. All rights reserved.
A friend suggested that the thoughts in Endangered Pleasures were three stories. And after Brian suggested I flesh them out, I'm giving it a try. So story 1 is Your way. Still not quite there but coming.
like the off beat song rhyme as it opposes the rest, think you should continue it throughout...
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Pierre
this is brilliant.
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we have your date stated in our poetry picnic post,
link in a random poem to share if you could.
bless you.
keep up the excellence.